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Ever W.I.P. by ~RaptorZefier:iconRaptorZefier:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Fantasy

©2008-2009 ~RaptorZefier
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This is a Work in Progress on a character revamp. . . Old character of mine called Ever. I'm combining some of the things I've picked up on more realistic faces, combined with more detail then I usually would, combined with some looking into female anatomy (Finally).

I'm not at all hesitant about submitting this W.I.P. because I know if I put half as much work into this as I want to, then this wont even look -close- to the finished product. . . All critque is not only welcomed but appreciated. . . She's supposed to have a ' Primal Nature Godess' look to her. . . And is in fact 'Merged' with a Tree which is some sort of bizarre Hybrid between a Willow and various other trees. (Showing her more chaotic control of Nature.) Her hair is supposed to look like it's 'changing' into Bark.

I can list a few things I'll definately try to change: Hands, they look all wrong. . . Legs, they just don't seem right to me, but ANY advice on that is appreciated, Tree. . . As it's COMPLETLY unfinished.

Overall I also want to pump this with more detail, alot more, days worth. . . I wont be satisfied until I do. . .

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=senbonzakura-06 Mar 26, 2008, 10:10:18 PM
As of right now, this looks pretty cool. I see that there is a lot more to added to this picture based on the description. I am not too sure about the tree trunk, though.

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"The Melody of Logic will always play the notes of truth." - Ayumu Narumi, Spiral - Suiri no Kizuna
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=Starda45 Mar 26, 2008, 10:15:01 PM
Wow...Sean this is already really good, I can't wait to see your finished project.

I think the hands are not bad, but they are a little manly, try to make them slimmer, more delicate. Look at some of [link] 's hands, she has some of my favorite examples.

The legs are coming along really well also...I see you've out lined some muscles in the right leg...that can work, when its a really close up, but Ever is off in the distance, you won't be able to see that detail, unless she was a man. Once again, try to make it more delicate...smooth.

Also the same with the arms...they're pretty bulky, give them a more stream lined look and they'll look better.

I can tell you've been studying the female figure because you have the hips, stomach and breasts down almost perfectly, you did a really wonderful job with her face as well.

I can't wait to see the finished product!

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--CJ

"I do not feel obliged to believe that the same God who has endowed us with sense, reason, and intellect has intended us to forgo their use.
--Galileo Galilei

"We are but children indeed."
--Macbeth from Shakespeare's Macbeth
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~Sanime-Kun Mar 26, 2008, 10:51:28 PM
I think manly when I look at this girl. Seriously those arms are HUGE! That is seriously one buff chick. Hands should not be bigger than the face and try putting less muscle on her. Woman are generally more slender. Her face looks a little gaunt. So while the body is getting good the face still needs work becoming more prettier

I think you should work on hair too. It looks like of messy. I can't tell you personally what to do since it's one of those I-have-to-be-there-to-show-you kind of thing

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The more hardcore of an otaku you are, the more of a turn on you get from guro.
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